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Millenials, THIS is how you write an e-mail

February 14, 2019 11:00 IST

While writing an e-mail, it is important to give the impression that what we are proposing is 'too good to pass up' as an opportunity for the recipient.
That we 'understand the recipient's point of view' says Kartik Bajoria.

How to write an e-mail

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With the increasing popularity of text messages, WhatsApp and other social media platforms, e-mail may not be considered important by the millennials (people born between the early 80s to late mid-2000s).

However, e-mail gains importance in the workplace.

If millennials can master the aspect of business writing, they will give themselves the best possible chance to make significant headway in their lives and professional careers.

Before we jump to list the tips for writing great e-mails, it might be worth understanding why e-mails have assumed the kind of importance they have.

First, because e-mails are admissible as proof in a court of law in most countries.

An e-mail record of any communication, discussion, negotiation, arrangement and understanding can serve as an undeniable record for the same, crucial while conducting business.

We are living in a world where business is being transacted across borders, often times without even physically meeting.

An e-mail becomes the 'first impression' of an individual, a professional, or of a company. It must have the desired, impressive effect.

Finally, e-mails are used as the go-to tool when we are pitching any proposal. As such, they must seem convincing, while being concise.

So here I'd like to share some tips on e-mail etiquette that will hopefully standardise the process, and help millennials write succinct, globally accepted polite yet convincing e-mails.

Find time to respond to e-mails

It is vital to find time to respond to e-mails.

One can appreciate the sheer numbers with which our inboxes are inundated.

But if we plan just a tad bit better and set aside that half hour to skim through our e-mail accounts, regularly; not only will you alleviate the '1,000 unread e-mails' situation, but also not offend the many people who would have assumed that you've given them the royal snub!

The right start and finish

Greetings and salutations that seem to cause much confusion can be simplified to a great extent.

Ending e-mails with a simple 'best' or 'regards', followed by your name is globally accepted and perfectly fine.

Similarly, to start e-mails with 'Dear', even if it is an official e-mail, is legitimate.

If one needs to be formal, one can always say 'Dear Mr X'.

Reply, no matter what!

Let's say you get an e-mail requesting you to speak at a function.

You know already for a number of reasons, you cannot, or do not want to accept the invitation. But reply, and be courteous.

It never hurt to thank someone or to express gratitude.

If you were to reply saying, 'I am most grateful that you thought of me to speak at your event. I regret I may have to decline due to prior commitments.'

These two short sentences that will have taken you a minute to write, will leave a wonderful impression in the minds of the person/organisation that reached out to you, despite your turning them down.

Complete the communication loop

This time, let us say that you have written to someone asking for something.

To your son's principal for extra holidays on account of an extended family vacation that is planned.

Even if the principal's reply is curt and declines your request, and inside you are fuming; it will only do good for you to say, 'Thank you for considering my request and responding. I appreciate your having taken the time.'

Not only will this dissipate your own anger, but it will also set a great example of your familial values to the principal, and in turn, hold your son in good stead at school.

Virtual anger

Avoid using upper-case/capital letters. This is considered a sign of ANGER!

It's really that simple!

It is applying all the spoken courtesies that we so regularly exercise in our everyday lives while interacting with the world, that need to be briefly translated into a few kind words of response over e-mails.

The world will be a better place for it.

You will not be nearly as annoyed when you hear that notification because keeping up with your e-mail communication in the proper etiquette will ensure that 'you've got mail', is never bothersome again!

Besides, isn't it time we started collecting some good karma online as well?

Keep subject line short

The subject tab in our e-mails must be kept short, to a maximum of three words wherever possible.

Let us say you are writing to pitch your business idea for funding.

Rather than saying 'New Idea For Web Chatting App', simply saying 'New Chatting App' conveys the same message, that too in a short number of words that will not spill-over to the next page of the recipient's inbox and vanish.

Further, inside the e-mail, you could write below the greeting, a 'Regarding' sentence such as:

This will give the recipient a chance to gather the entire gist without having to read the whole e-mail.

Even if the recipient immediately rejects the e-mail based on the 'investment request' at the very outset, he/she will remember you favourably for not having wasted their time and for having been honest and forthcoming right at the beginning.

Strategise and pre-empt

We should try and structure our e-mails in a manner that reduces back and forth between the writer and the recipient.

Equally important is to give the impression that what we are proposing is 'too good to pass up' as an opportunity for the recipient, and that we 'understand the recipient's point of view'.

In order to achieve these things, I have found that it is a great idea to use the following strategy:

Following the above strategies and basic etiquette will ensure that e-mail communication is smoother, more effective, and quite frankly, lesser.

Millennials conduct most business communication virtually and in order to achieve an optimal level of desired results, e-mail writing has become the cornerstone of business writing.

 Lead image published for representational purposes only.

Kartik Bajoria